Common Mistake
You made the common mistake of spelling poseur as poser. Usually I wouldn't correct someone but since your advertising something, it kind of makes you look bad if you spell something wrong. Just saying.
Common Mistake
You made the common mistake of spelling poseur as poser. Usually I wouldn't correct someone but since your advertising something, it kind of makes you look bad if you spell something wrong. Just saying.
David Spade!
Amazing animation. The style was original and looked great. I can really see the spontaneaty in the plot. (Why does spontaneaty always result in pancakes, pie, or muffins?) Anyways it was great. And the pancake guy sounds like David Spade... in my opinion.
Ups and Downs
Ups - Voice all quite good (Sonic guy's is a little to droll) / Animation / Artwork / Recreation of scenes / Music
Downs - Sonic Character / Kind of dragged on (slow) / Some jokes not too funny
I reccomend making a series with quick and funny jokes. It was pretty impressive!
Wow Battle Toads?
I remember the original Battle Toads! I had it on the first gameboy when I was like, 7. I hated Battle Toads! Never beat that stupid game. Anyways, it was kind of cool seeing them in a flash. Nice sprites, pointless dialog. Has potential.
Saggy Grandma
His laugh is stuck in my head. I want to try and do the laugh but I just can't. By the way, the whole thing was hillarious. Loved the kids meal thing. Ok I'm gonna go find that easter egg. Good Luck in the Newgrounds Halloween Competition...
Yeah she was quite saggy haha
HAM HAM HAM
Now all I can think about is HAM! And Rocky. Rocky playing the Rocky theme song and eating ham. Ham, which I must tell you, looks a bit like a mutated boob. Yah you know you agree that the ham looks like a mutated boob...
Actually I was thinking the same thing at one point. Which is why I cut out the scene of two dancing hams next to each other.
Uh Oh...
I know you don't want people to rate this badly but you also want people to be honest so honestly... this will probably get blammed. If it doesn't congratulations, thats great news! Yes your trial for flash ran out but things like the fart joke, the mispelling of the word sense and the giant unrecognizable cow sprite will probably make people want to vote low on this. Also when people ask people not to blam stuff... they usually blam it anyways. Practice flash and watch other sprite movies to gain experience so you can get better. Good Luck
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Age 33, Male
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J.W. Mitchell High
Florida
Joined on 6/7/06